Abstract vs. Introduction—What's the Difference?

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Have you been writing your paper only to get stuck when you get to your abstract and introduction?

Despite being at the beginning of our papers, abstracts and introductions are often the last things we write and can sometimes be the toughest. Before you begin writing your abstract and introduction, you should understand their purpose and how they differ from each other.

By doing so, you can improve your writing and ensure both sections serve their roles, supporting the rest of your paper and making a positive first impression on your readers.

So, here's everything you need to know about abstracts and introductions, including their fundamental differences. 

What Is an Abstract?

An abstract is a summary of your paper, providing the following key information:

• The context of your research
• The problem(s) your research addresses
• The goals of your research
• Your research methods
• Your sample size
• Your primary findings
• The significance of your findings
• The main conclusions of your research

What Is the Purpose of an Abstract?

An abstract aims to generate interest in your paper and quickly give readers a sense of its content. Readers may also refer back to an abstract after finishing your paper, as it can remind them of your key points and findings.

The content of abstracts can vary depending on the type of work. When learning how to write an abstract, you'll see that some abstracts serve primarily as descriptions and may not present specific research outcomes.

In contrast, informative abstracts may provide more detailed insights into the findings and implications of your research. 

The Impact on Visibility

Abstracts are often the first and sometimes the only part of a paper that is read. If you want to gain as much visibility for your research as possible, you'll need to pay particular attention to this section.

A high-quality abstract can increase citation rates and reader engagement, exposing your paper to a wider audience.

In this study, the researchers referred to other papers to highlight the importance and impact of considering search engine optimization and including relevant keywords in abstracts.

A similar paper emphasized how the purpose of an abstract is to reinforce the primary keywords from the title. While this paper recommends being cautious not to overoptimize your abstract, including keywords and phrases up to four times can improve your rankings on search engine results pages.

Example of an Abstract

We can look at excerpts from an abstract written for a paper studying the relationship between Instagram use frequency, exposure to idealized images, and psychological well-being in women.

"This study aimed to address the link between Instagram use and a range of psychological variables in two parts."

"Participants were 129 women aged between 18 and 35 years."

"Beauty and fitness images significantly decreased self-rated attractiveness, and the magnitude of this decrease correlated with anxiety, depressive symptoms, self-esteem, and body dissatisfaction. Therefore, excessive Instagram use may contribute to negative psychological outcomes and poor appearance-related self-perception, in line with prior research."

"The research has implications for interventions and education about chronic Instagram use."

While the full abstract provides more details, these excerpts highlight important information the writer has included, such as the study's purpose, methodology, participant demographics, key findings, and implications.

This information gives readers a quick look at the research and its significance, as the abstract summarizes the main details of the entire paper.

Strategic Tips for Writing Abstracts

As abstracts are critical to your paper's visibility and engagement, it's important to take your time when writing one, carefully considering what to include and how to structure it.

Use active verbs rather than passive verbs whenever possible. Active verbs such as "identifies," "explores," "highlights," "proposes," "utilizes," and "challenges" are high impact and add energy to your abstract, helping you engage your readers from the get-go.

Abstracts are also more impactful when written in the third person, which establishes an objective and professional tone. For example, the abstract of this study ends with "This paper will further elaborate on the relative merits of each tumor type as a model for human cancer therapy and biology" rather than with "My paper will …."

In most scientific and academic contexts, findings from research are viewed as contributions to a broad body of knowledge rather than personal discoveries, so writing in the third person rather than the first helps the writer frame their results as part of ongoing academic research.

Tailoring to Audiences

When writing your abstract, consider your field and your reader's expertise, and tailor it to your audience by adjusting your language, tone, and focus.

For a clinical research paper, you may bring focus to your methodology, results, and implications. Other researchers or professionals in the field will require a concise and informative abstract to immediately determine the paper's relevance and the research's applicability for their work.

In contrast, in sociological research, abstracts can focus more on context, theory, and conceptual analysis rather than on practical outcomes. Researchers in this field may find more value in new perspectives and frameworks outlined in the abstract than in immediate outcomes or findings.

Consider who will most likely encounter your paper's abstract and what they're looking for so you can include appropriate and helpful information.

What Is an Introduction?

An introduction is your paper's opening section, which includes the following:

• The broader context of your research
• The objectives and aims of your research
• Your main argument
• The rationale for your research methods
• An overview of the structure of the paper

What Is the Purpose of an Introduction?

Introductions convince readers of your paper's importance and relevance. Through your introduction, you can also showcase the quality of your work, your analytical skills, and your writing style.

In our essay introduction examples, we show how an attention-grabbing and professional introduction can engage readers, prompt them to take an interest in your research, and read the rest of your paper.

That's why, like many writers do to hook readers, you can begin your introduction with an interesting and relevant fact, question, or quote.

Your introduction can also include relevant keywords to improve your visibility in search engines. Remember to incorporate them naturally and ensure they don't disrupt the flow of your writing.

Example of an Introduction

Here are important excerpts from an introduction to a paper on anticipatory behavior in animals:

"Animals can use the knowledge they acquire about temporal and spatial patterns to predict when and where resources may be found and thus better exploit opportunities. In this way, animals use environmental cues to anticipate a reward and exploit this knowledge to better direct their behavior."

"However, in the anticipatory behavior literature, it is often unclear what if any function the behaviors reported actually achieve in helping the animal acquire a reward."

"This absence of theory may explain: i) why some studies rely on meta-behaviors, such as the frequency of behavioral elements or transitions (henceforth called behavioral transitions) as the outcome measure (e.g. van den Bos et al. 2003); ii) the bewildering variation in anticipatory behaviors described in different situations and for different species; and iii) why authors sometimes draw similar inferences based upon divergent (and even contradictory) evidence."

"The aim of the current paper is to examine the conceptual and empirical foundations of welfare-related inferences about anticipatory behavior."

"We begin with a discussion of classical conditioning and the interpretation of behaviors that occur during the interval between a cue and the presentation of the reward. We then discuss how superstitious learning may affect the behaviors expressed. We briefly describe the methodologies used and the differences in the inferences made from these studies. Finally, we discuss methodological confounds and provide suggestions for future study."

The introduction begins with an interesting fact, highlights the paper's context, refers to existing research, and indicates current gaps in understanding. The writer then discusses the paper's aim, main argument, and general structure, giving readers enough background information to interest them and guide them to the body content.

Strategic Tips for Writing Introductions

As with abstracts, your introduction can influence how your paper is perceived and engaged with. An introduction sets the stage for your paper, and from the first sentence, you should focus on drawing in and interesting your readers.

Avoid overused and generic opening sentences, such as "The dictionary defines ___ as …," "In today's society …" and "Throughout history …." Similarly, a basic sentence such as "The purpose of this study is to …" is uninspired and won't make a strong impression. These types of opening sentences lack any depth or originality, disengaging your readers and reducing your credibility.

Instead, your opening sentences should be unique and thought-provoking to hook your readers and convince them to continue reading.

Example

For example, this study on applications and issues of nanotechnology begins its introduction as follows: "Science and technology continue to move forward in making the fabrication of micro or nanodevices and systems possible for a variety of industrial, consumer, and biomedical applications."

This opening sentence immediately establishes the focus and context of the paper while highlighting the broader impacts of the subject on various sectors (industrial, consumer, and biomedical), attracting a vast range of readers from different fields.  

Tailoring to Audiences

The above example also demonstrates how an introduction, similar to an abstract, can be tailored to different audiences. To target a wide audience with less specialized knowledge, the writer of this paper provides a brief description of nanotechnology and its applications rather than a highly technical or in-depth analysis.

The writer also uses accessible language and avoids detailed references to scientific processes or methods, which may be present in a paper aimed at more specialized or knowledgeable readers. For instance, the introduction includes a definition: "According to the National Science Foundation and NNI, nanotechnology is the ability to understand, control and manipulate matter at the level of individual atoms and molecules." This helps readers grasp the fundamental concept of nanotechnology and prepares them to understand the rest of the paper.

In contrast, this study on the interdisciplinarity of nanotechnology uses more technical language in its introduction and focuses on specific researchers and studies without any basic explanations or simplifications. For example, this sentence in the introduction may confuse audiences with limited background knowledge: "Convergence of diverse nano fields has been conceptualized in various ways, reflecting even the divergent top-down and bottom-up approaches of nanotechnology itself."

However, researchers and professionals in this field will appreciate precise and technical language rather than reading any information they already know, such as topic definitions.

Consider these examples when writing your paper's introduction to make sure you adjust your tone, use of language, and level of detail to cater to and subsequently interest your audience.

What Are the Differences Between an Abstract and an Introduction?

Here's how abstracts and introductions differ:

The Abstract Comes Before the Introduction

Serving as an advertisement for your paper by providing general information, the abstract is always the first section readers encounter, which is why it comes before the introduction.

Your introduction comes next and will expand on the details mentioned in the abstract, leading to the main body of your paper.

Abstracts Have Fewer Words Than Introductions

Abstracts are typically limited to 100–300 words. You need to be concise when summarizing your paper.

Introductions can be much longer, consisting of 500 or more words, and often correspond to the paper's overall length and complexity. Although the ideal length of an introduction may vary, a general rule of thumb is that it should be around 10% of your paper's total length.

In both cases, you should avoid providing excessive detail and stay focused.

An Introduction Is Brief While an Abstract Is More Detailed

Although abstracts are shorter than introductions, they often include more specific details about key aspects of the study.

Introductions typically provide only a broad overview, focusing on background information and the research question rather than detailed findings.

Only Introductions Contain Reference Citations

Introductions can include reference citations to ground the study and show its relevance. By including references, you can demonstrate how your paper builds on existing research while updating readers on the topic or the current state of knowledge in your field.

For example, in a section of this introduction, two valuable and interesting references are included:

"In contrast with maize and wheat, rice is mainly produced for human consumption (>80%), and rarely utilized as an animal feed (Müller-Fischer, 2013). In 2012, global rice paddy production was 731.2 million tons and, once milled, amounted to 487.5 million tons (FAO, 2013)."

Abstracts never include reference citations. When you write an abstract, you'll only focus on the details of your own paper.

Only Abstracts Summarize the Paper

An abstract provides a summary of your entire paper, including some of your findings and conclusions.

Introductions rarely include this information, as they mainly set up a paper's purpose and topic. 

Abstract vs. Introduction in a Scientific Paper

When you write a scientific paper, the abstract summarizes your experiment, including your research question, methods, and results.

The introduction provides context for the research by explaining the problem, introducing relevant literature, and outlining the hypotheses.

Try our scientific editing services to ensure all sections of your paper, including your abstract and introduction, are clear and informative.

Abstract vs. Introduction in a Research Paper

In a research paper, the abstract provides a summary of your topic, the central questions or statements your research addresses, and the goals or rationale of your research.

The introduction will provide more background information, including a brief overview of relevant theories or related research, to ease readers into the detailed content of your paper.

Abstract vs. Introduction in an Essay

When writing or editing essays or similar forms of academic writing, the abstract highlights your main arguments and conclusions, while the introduction covers the topic in detail, provides background information, and presents the thesis statement.

Abstract vs. Introduction in a Dissertation

When writing or editing dissertations, ensure that the abstract covers your research's purpose, methodology, and key findings.

The introduction further defines the scope of your research while providing cited literature and briefly explaining your dissertation's relevance and contribution to your topic.

Common Mistakes to Avoid When Writing Abstracts and Introductions

Here are some common abstract and introduction mistakes you should avoid:

• Using excessive jargon: Although you may (sparingly) use jargon and technical terms throughout the main body of your paper, including them in your abstract and introduction can make your points unclear and may even alienate readers who are unfamiliar with your topic.
• Forgetting about keywords: If you want your paper to be visible in databases or search engines, be sure to include relevant keywords throughout your abstract and introduction.
• Going on a tangent: It's easy for us to get carried away in abstracts and introductions, especially when we've spent so much time researching and discussing a topic. Try to avoid going on a tangent in these sections, and ensure that every sentence is focused and serves a distinct purpose.
• Writing too little or too much: We already know the optimal length for abstracts and introductions. If you exceed the recommended word count by too much for either section, you may lose your readers' interest. In contrast, writing too little means that your abstract and introduction are likely not detailed or informative enough.

Adjusting Abstracts and Introductions for Different Style Guides 

When writing a paper, you should be familiar with the style guide you're required or recommended to follow.

In addition to formatting, referencing, punctuation, tone, and language rules, general guidelines for abstracts and introductions can be found in some style guides.

For example, in the 7th edition of the Publication Manual of the American Psychological Association (APA), writers should adhere to the following:

• The abstract is placed on a separate page after the title page and should be limited to 250 words.
• The first line of the abstract should begin at the left margin without any indentation.
• The section's label, "Abstract," should be centered and in bold.
• The introduction should not be labeled. Instead, the title should be at the top of the page.
• Aim to use active voice, although intentional passive is still acceptable.

Other style guides, including Chicago and Council of Science Editors (CSE), do not provide distinct guidelines for abstracts and introductions but do offer instructions for general formatting and citations.

If you are writing your paper in these styles, we suggest following publication- or institution-specific requirements to ensure that your work meets their expectations.

Can the Abstract and Introduction Contain the Same Information?

Although some themes and ideas may overlap in your abstract and introduction, you should try to avoid repeating the same information, because the two sections serve distinct purposes.

After reading your abstract, your readers will already know what to expect from your study. From there, they'll move on to the introduction, where you'll be introducing your paper rather than repeating anything you've already mentioned in your abstract.

Get More Advice on Writing Abstracts and Introductions

Despite their differences, the abstract and introduction are both vital parts of your paper.

Without them, readers may feel disoriented as they navigate the main body because they need context to understand the purpose, findings, and arguments of your research.

Take your time when writing these sections, and explore other papers for inspiration. With a well-written abstract and introduction, you'll set high expectations for your readers and grab their interest from the very start.

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